I've posted the work of Kim Addonizio here before. I've shared this one with a few friends, but thought I'd just post it here too.
I like how raw it is...I particularly adore these lines: "You know/where she's headed, you know she'll wake up/with an ache she can't locate and no money/and a terrible thirst"
You Don't Know What Love Is
You don't know what love is
but you know how to raise it in me
like a dead girl winched up from a river. How to
wash off the sludge, the stench of our past.
How to start clean. This love even sits up
and blinks; amazed, she takes a few shaky steps.
Any day now she'll try to eat solid food. She'll want
to get into a fast car, one low to the ground, and drive
to some cinderblock shithole in the desert
where she can drink and get sick and then
dance in nothing but her underwear. You know
where she's headed, you know she'll wake up
with an ache she can't locate and no money
and a terrible thirst. So to hell
with your warm hands sliding inside my shirt
and your tongue down my throat
like an oxygen tube. Cover me
in black plastic. Let the mourners through.
2 comments:
:) discovered her couple of months ago, and have been reading stuff by her online...
This poem is so alive, while being so dead. The personification at first reading had me stare, coz of the identification. Such powerful emotion i've never been able to put to paper.
Yes, she's really something. I wrote to her to say how much I appreciated her work and she wrote back..which made me smile for a week.
Have you read Good Girl? It's fantastic too. If you haven't read it, here's a link: http://www.colorado.edu/journals/standards/V7N1/MMM/addonizio1.html
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